Little Moments and Breaking Point
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I previously mentioned and linked these Ben 10 fan fiction stories a while back but I've decided that I want to give them their own dedicated page on this site. Here are the links to these fan fiction stories by shadows59. I highly recommend this very series because it's just so very well written and great to read. Many consider this to be one of the best Ben 10 fan fiction series out there. It does have a focus on Ben and Gwen being in a romantic relationship with each other (aka Bwen) but it's still just such a great series to read. Here are the links to the stories.
Little Moments
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8440324/1/Little-Moments-Director-s-Cut
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Little Moments: As Old As You Feel by Erico
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11270591/1/Little-Moment-As-Old-As-You-Feel
(A spin off that takes place during the last segment of Chapter 22 of Little Moments. Confirmed by shadows59 to be canon to the main story.)Breaking Point:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8588746/1/Breaking-Point-Revised
(Not finished yet and hasn't been worked on for years but shadows59 did express interest in wanting to finish the story hopefully soon.)As a further addition, a while back, I found these commissions of two of the characters from Little Moments on Deviant-art that I find to be worth sharing.
Marci Hunter (Gwen's equivalent of Ben's bullies, Cash and JT)
Michelle Hallam (Gwen's best friend)Just recently on the morning of the day I made this page, I found three more commissions on Deviant-art based around the Little Moments series that I find to be really neat to share on here. The commission drawing of Ken Tennyson is the one that interests me the most considering just how different he looks compared to his portrayal in the actual shows (you'll pretty much know why when you read the description).
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Two more images based on Little Moments and Breaking Point have been made and posted on Deviant-art featuring an older Michelle Hallam.
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Some new artwork of characters based on the Little Moments and Breaking Point fanfic stories were made and posted by Amethyst-Ocean. They feature Michelle Hallam and Marci Hunter's parents along with a new image of Marci.
Nadia Hallam
http://amethyst-ocean.deviantart.com/art/Commission-Nadia-Hallam-646463059Jonathan Hallam
http://amethyst-ocean.deviantart.com/art/Commission-Jonathan-Hallam-646469217Jerri Hunter
http://amethyst-ocean.deviantart.com/art/Commission-Jerri-Hunter-646467228George Hunter
http://amethyst-ocean.deviantart.com/art/Commission-George-Hunter-648096753Marci Hunter
http://amethyst-ocean.deviantart.com/art/Commission-Marci-Hunter-648086812 -
Wow, holy shit. A FanFiction.net user known as Erico, who previously wrote another spin-off chapter for shadows59's Ben 10 fanfic, Little Moments, made another chapter as a companion piece for Little Moment's sequel, Breaking Point, that acts as a prequel to Little Moments. It's amazing. This is some of the finest writing I've seen in anything Ben 10 related. I haven't read as good of a Ben 10 fanfic as this since Little Moments and Breaking Point. I HIGHLY recommend for you all to read this fanfic. It's absolutely brilliant.
Little Moment: Stone in the River by Erico
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12621593/1/Little-Moment-Stone-in-the-RiverSoon after Erico posted his story, shadows59 posted an update in the Little Moments story saying how this very prequel brought a lot of inspiration to him. Feel free to check this out as well.
Little Moments has a Prequel!
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8440324/25/Little-Moments -
Just recently, Erico posted a sequel to his prequel chapter, Little Moment: Stone in the River. The sequel is called Little Moment: Kiss Me Goodbye and follows up right after the events of the Ben 10,000 episode from the Original Series and focuses on the consequences of future Gwen's actions from using the time traveling spell. I was so amazed and impressed with what I read here and I highly recommend for others to check it out, regardless of your views towards the Bwen shipping or whatever. Such a brilliant addition to shadows59's Little Moments universe. Erico did a fantastic job here. I know that this isn't really a well-depth review, nor would I even consider this a review, but this is something that you just have to read for yourself. Feel free to check out the other iterations of the Little Moments series as well.
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