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  • Tactical OchoaT

    Breaking Point Rebooted

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    Haven't posted an update in a good while. shadows59 and Erico released the fifteenth chapter of Breaking Point Rebooted. With the arc of that section of the story now complete, the story will be going back on hiatus as the writers work on the next arc of the story.
  • OffbeatcatO

    How I'd reboot Ben 10: Finale, The main 10.

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    My 5th change involves replacing crashhopper with XLR8, since jetray no longer took up the "stupid fast" spot. and yes, i'm still working on this.
  • OffbeatcatO

    How I'd reboot Ben 10: Part 2, characters

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    Revision #1: Ben and Gwen are to start out really disliking each other, yet needing one another. Ben has the power, but second guesses himself and has trouble making important decisions. Gwen is intelligent, and good at speaking her mind, but ultimately she can't fight (not at the start of the series, anyways). When they work together, Gwen can give ideas and advice for how Ben can use his aliens, and help him make tough choices in dangerous situations. Their dynamic needs to be utilized, and needs to be about the two growing to respect one another.
  • OffbeatcatO

    How I'd reboot Ben 10: Part 1, Story (season 1)

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    Story revision #1: Gwen would have a character arc throughout this season, of at least learning to be the support for Ben that he needs, and learning how she can be a hero, with what little she can do.
  • Tactical OchoaT

    Little Moments and Breaking Point

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    Just recently, Erico posted a sequel to his prequel chapter, Little Moment: Stone in the River. The sequel is called Little Moment: Kiss Me Goodbye and follows up right after the events of the Ben 10,000 episode from the Original Series and focuses on the consequences of future Gwen's actions from using the time traveling spell. I was so amazed and impressed with what I read here and I highly recommend for others to check it out, regardless of your views towards the Bwen shipping or whatever. Such a brilliant addition to shadows59's Little Moments universe. Erico did a fantastic job here. I know that this isn't really a well-depth review, nor would I even consider this a review, but this is something that you just have to read for yourself. Feel free to check out the other iterations of the Little Moments series as well. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13270273/1/