Story revision #1: Gwen would have a character arc throughout this season, of at least learning to be the support for Ben that he needs, and learning how she can be a hero, with what little she can do.
Revision #1: Ben and Gwen are to start out really disliking each other, yet needing one another. Ben has the power, but second guesses himself and has trouble making important decisions. Gwen is intelligent, and good at speaking her mind, but ultimately she can't fight (not at the start of the series, anyways). When they work together, Gwen can give ideas and advice for how Ben can use his aliens, and help him make tough choices in dangerous situations. Their dynamic needs to be utilized, and needs to be about the two growing to respect one another.
A little update on this fanfiction.
So within this coming week I'll be making announcements about the fanfiction, as well as posting more characters.
But my DeviantArt has 2 characters and 8 aliens and there are more where that came from. If you haven't checked it out, the link is in the comment above. Let me know what you guys think of the designs.
I will let you all know there will be a sneak peek coming this Friday that I will release on both here and BTFF. I'll have to be a little less graphic on here since this is a TV-MA fan-series. I'll dial it back to TV-PG/14 for your guys sake but other than that, enjoy
(If you see another comment just like this, I had trouble removing it because I forgot the mini-poster had a little mature content that I didn't notice for a moment and I didn't want to alert people with so I'm just letting you know now if this looks like a repost, I was just trying to remove it right away since there's a 5 minute editing limit (stupidly))